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Etched in Ebony

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Introduction

“Etched in Ebony” first appeared as part of a group of pieces titled “Sketches” in The Junto. The story centers on a man’s contrasting responses to white and Black women, combining sexuality, violence and the racial attitudes of its period.

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The story opens with a violent encounter between the narrator and a woman. The woman's fingers claw at the narrator's face, leading him to strike her and subdue her with a blow. Despite the physical confrontation, the woman reacts with a mixture of laughter and a primal cry. The narrator grabs her throat, and she responds by wrapping her arms around his neck in a tight grip. Amidst the physical struggle, she taunts him, asking if he prefers her to any white woman he has known. The narrator is overwhelmed by a surge of primal emotions, described as a response to her fiery spirit. He repeatedly strikes her, but her reaction is one of knowing laughter, which heightens the tension and intensity of the moment. The narrative concludes with the narrator's reflection on the differences between white and black women, comparing the former to marble and ice, and the latter to supple steel and blasting fire.

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