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Characters in this exact text
AlexanderAlexander — Breckinridge Elkins's muleOn Pagefirst: First Cuts: Rough Trails 1, p. 41Bat O'ToolBat O'Tool — visiting boxer from New YorkOn Pagefirst: First Cuts: Rough Trails 1, p. 48BillBill Elkins — Breckinridge's brother; not his father Roarin' Bill ElkinsMentionedfirst: First Cuts: Rough Trails 1, p. 41Bill ElstonBill Elston — intended recipient of the post-office letterMentionedfirst: First Cuts: Rough Trails 1, p. 55Buffalo RogersBill Rogers — local acquaintance who relays the post-office messageMentionedfirst: First Cuts: Rough Trails 1, p. 41old man BraxtonBraxton — Tomahawk storekeeper/postmasterOn Pagefirst: First Cuts: Rough Trails 1, p. 48Breckinridge ElkinsBreckinridge ElkinsOn Pagefirst: First Cuts: Rough Trails 1, p. 41Bruiser McGoortyBruiser McGoorty — boxer from San FranciscoOn Pagefirst: First Cuts: Rough Trails 1, p. 48Comanche SantryComanche Santry — outlaw gang leaderMentionedfirst: First Cuts: Rough Trails 1, p. 45JohnJohn Elkins — Breckinridge's brotherMentionedfirst: First Cuts: Rough Trails 1, p. 41McVeyMcVey — Sheriff in the Tomahawk / Bear Creek storiesOn Pagefirst: First Cuts: Rough Trails 1, p. 45Roarin' Bill ElkinsRoarin' Bill Elkins — Breckinridge's fatherOn Pagefirst: First Cuts: Rough Trails 1, p. 41Yucca BlaineYucca Blaine — boxing refereeOn Pagefirst: First Cuts: Rough Trails 1, p. 49
Surviving manuscript evidence
The records below describe surviving physical typescripts, carbons, manuscript material and documentary catalogue evidence for this exact textual state. TSS numbers identify physical catalogue units; they are not story or draft IDs.
Draft 3 — surviving Howard carbon copyHoward carbon copy
Extent18 pagesCompletenessComplete
TSS: 63717–63733, 65867
Carbon copy typescript on onion skin paper; text is extremely faint.
Additional documentary notes
- Onion-skin carbon: Carbon copy typed on onion skin paper. (whole witness)
- Faint text: The surviving carbon is extremely faint. (whole witness)
Source: First Cuts: Breckinridge Elkins — Rough Trails 1, Editorial Notes, p. 3

