Untitled story (The matter seemed so obvious that my only answer . . .)

Introduction

This untitled story revolves around the dynamics between a young woman named Marilyn, her family, and her suitor. The narrative explores themes of independence, societal expectations, and familial concern, set against the backdrop of Marilyn’s unconventional interests and lifestyle.

UNTITLED STORY (The matter seemed so obvious that my only answer . . .). 700 words, incomplete.

This story provides a glimpse into the tension between individual independence and familial expectations, set within the unique context of Marilyn’s mystical and non-traditional pursuits.

Summary

The story opens with Marilyn expressing her frustration to the narrator, Hal, over her aunts’ outdated beliefs that she needs a protector. Marilyn passionately criticizes the Victorian notion that women cannot live their own lives without male supervision. She contrasts her successful and fulfilling life with that of her cousins, who she perceives as leading unproductive lives focused on socializing.

In the midst of her rant, Marilyn suddenly softens and apologizes to Hal, explaining that her anger is directed at her Aunt Josephine, not him. At this moment, a gong sounds, signaling the start of an event. Marilyn quickly dons a fez and returns to her throne, transforming into her mystical persona.

A large African-American man named Ali, also known as Erasmus Bix, appears and awkwardly announces the arrival of a visitor. Hal is surprised to recognize Ali, whom he knew under a different identity. Marilyn, now in her role as Ranee Nerula, instructs Ali to allow the visitor to enter.

The visitor, a shy young man, approaches Marilyn and asks for her advice regarding his romantic prospects with a certain young lady. Initially, Marilyn dismisses his inquiry as inappropriate for the “shrine of Ammon.” However, she relents and invites him to ascend the stairs and speak further, indicating that Hal should leave the room.

Later, Hal recounts staying at another aunt’s home where Aunt Josephine expresses her concerns about Marilyn. Josephine is worried about Marilyn’s intense involvement in her downtown establishment, where she engages with a variety of characters and esoteric studies. Despite Marilyn’s resistance to conventional social activities, Josephine insists that Hal should stay close to her and keep an eye on her activities, believing Marilyn is too young and naive to protect herself.

Characters

  • Marilyn (Ranee Nerula): A young, independent woman who rejects traditional expectations and immerses herself in mystical and esoteric pursuits. She is passionate, headstrong, and unafraid to challenge societal norms.
  • Hal: The narrator and a relative of Marilyn. He is tasked by Aunt Josephine to watch over Marilyn and ensure her safety.
  • Aunt Josephine: Marilyn’s concerned aunt who disapproves of Marilyn’s lifestyle and believes she needs protection and guidance.
  • Ali (Erasmus Bix): A large African-American man who serves Marilyn in her mystical establishment. He is known to Hal by a different name, indicating a complex background.
  • Unnamed Young Man: A visitor to Marilyn’s establishment seeking romantic advice. He is characterized by his shyness and uncertainty.

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